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NASB | Genesis 3:21 The LORD God made garments of skin for Adam and his wife, and clothed them. |
AMPLIFIED 2015 | Genesis 3:21 The LORD God made tunics of [animal] skins for Adam and his wife and clothed them. |
Subject: My first Poem, Should I keep my dayjob? |
Bible Note: Hey Scribe: I like it. Especially the 3rd couplet. The last line seems a little ponderous. Heavy handed... How about: "And who is this garden priest of Eden? The lamb, upon whom I'm feedin'." Sorry, that's horrible. "The Lamb that saints believe in." But really, I think it needs another edit on the ending - you really need to nail it. Some ambiguity is Ok --give enough that people can think it through. Until then, well, a day job can give you the freedom to create without compromising ;-) |